Letting go...

by becca   Mar 22, 2007


Ive clung on so hard,
Though my body feels so weak,
Till my nails draw blood,
And tears stain my cheeks.

Ive clung on so hard,
To every word that you said,
Till my eyes bleach with teardrops,
And my palms are scarred red.

Ive clung on so hard,
To every second we spent,
Every thing we did,
Every place we went.

Ive clung on so hard,
I need to face facts,
I can cling on forever
But you're not coming back,
Ive clung on so hard,
With everything that I am,
But now, I regret,
Ive clung as long as I can.
I'm slacking my grip,
I need you to know,
I'm finding my freedom,
I'm letting you go...

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  • 16 years ago

    by carl

    Brilliant poem well done , excellent emotion for a 15 year old. keep it up , looking forward to a poem you write when you are in love. carlos

  • 16 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    This was a pretty good poem, the flow was great and the repetition was very very good.Though, I think you should put it in stanzas' it would give it more structure. But overall very well written and many can relate. Keep up the good work!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xXAxTwistedxWishXx

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  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    Absolutely wonderful...
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    *isabel*

  • 17 years ago

    by Caz

    Wow... I Can Really Relate..
    Its Great, Keep It Up xxxx