Mmm.
real good. kinda mysterious tough. we don't really know what the girl is facing, but we cant help but feel sympathy for her.

I have a poem similar to this one called "This One Girl". this sends out strong emotion and is relatable and thats why it makes it even more interesting. i love your work. and thank you for the comment :)

Be who you are. be the read you. don't be fake and don't try to be someone your not. i got alot out of this poem. thank you.

5/5 David

I am...speechless. this poem was so sad. beautiful job *sniff* 5/5.

I related to this so much & the words are so true to the heart. 5 on 5 gud work

I think tht u hav poems tht every 1 can relate to..its lik u r one of those ppl tht u can rite about something sad or happy and ppl can relate...thts a good thing rite? lol this is another good poem lik it =)