He was so strong ...

by kate   Mar 23, 2007


The perfect night.

everything going right.

nothing could spoil it.

nothing.

he took her hand.

whispered in her ear.

in the middle of nowhere.

she didn't care.

trust.

he kissed her.

one last time.

before.

water turned red.

------

her life.

in his hands.

he was so strong.

scream.

scream.

scream.

no one can her you.

in the middle of nowhere.

left.

without a trace.

the dismay in her eyes.

cried one last tear.

never again.

------

breathing.

lost.

pulse.

gone.

life.

over.

nothingness.

her corpse left.

with but a single rose.

held in her hands.

the petals fall.

and float away.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Wow... that's beautiful. well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    :O wow thats so good, keep writing, this is good talent xxxxxxxxxxxx