Beauty and the beast

by thing3   Mar 23, 2007


Never before had he seen such beauty,
as she lay there before him cold and pale.
he got on his knees and started praying,
trying to prevent his soul from going to hell.

he clasped his warms hands around her white face,
and shivers went up and down his spine.
she lay there innocent and vulnerable,
as he thought "she will always be mine".

he gently picked her up from the ground,
and took her to his home amongst the hills.
but the feeling of guilt was to much for him,
and so he topped himself with pills.

so there they both led, eyelids shut,
beauty and the beast, a princess and some bloke.
both seemed as dead as each other,
then suddenly she awoke...

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  • 16 years ago

    by JodiieBaybeh

    I loved this peice it reminded me abit of sleeping beauty at the start then romeo and juliet at the end i thought it was really well written and i agree^^^^^ it does show you was ment to be a writer ... and your style is very origonal and different i loved it ! x

  • 17 years ago

    by Sam

    This is a really deep poem i like it. It has alot of details. It shows u were ment to be a writer

  • 17 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    Wow, another mintage twist!!!
    (Mintage for us bristolians!!!)
    very well written my gurt goffic friend!!!
    luv ya! In a friendship way...
    Kat-x-