I feel those words

This poem is short but still has emotion in every line.. nice job

Short but straight to the point, i like it good job.

Wow... not what you normally think of with a love poem, but it totally fits. Excellent job; very nice ending with the question -- it makes your audience really think about the topic.

5/5

[tragic]

The poem is short but the emotion is strong, the word choice is briallant the flow is smooth, and the message is clear you did an excekkent job on this, 5/5

Wow,, this poem is rele good,, it is short in form but long in meaning. rele good,, 5/5
Janaynay

P.S. ty for the comment on my poem

I like it...its short but so very true...i no what u mean its like you really like someone and they hurt u so bad...i really love this one 5/5!!