Awww this is such a good poem, why is tehre no comments its really really good, well done xxxxxx

Good Travis. Very Good.

=-Batman-=

We always go through life trying to impress and and prove everything to everyone else, when all we really have to do is prove it to ourselves great job 5/5

Amazing.
Though terribly sad. In some ways, I can relate. Sometimes, it feels as if my whole family expects ME to be the one to go above and beyond and achieve the dreams they never got. When it's not what I want, though I do it anyway because I love them. =] Fantastic poem, truly filled with emotion. 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Awe. that is so sweet! i feel that way but with my mom instead of my dad. i make straight a's but all my mom cares about is that one a- and how it could have been higher. great poem 5/5

xoxo kisses

Wow, this was very powerful and moving. i can definitely relate to this poem, I also feel like I'm never good enough for my dad. I loved the use of figurative language and repetion of the line "I am proud of you today" it really makes your desire for your father approval stand out. You have quite a talent for rhythm and rhyming and I liked the iambic rhythm, it made your poem seem more casual, as if you were really begging your father to accept you. The paragraph structure was very well done as well, five lines in each one and the rhyme scheme was pretty much spot on in each one. Great work, I really enjoyed reading this.

--Steph

Deep! 5/5

Awh wow! this almsot brought a tear to my eye! so sad, yet so beautifully written. all in all it was a magnificent poem! the flow was nice and you expressed yourself so so well. job well done. 5/5.