Hey hun. that was really beautiful. nice phrasing and creative word use. you should read my poem "You're my hero daddy" maybe you'll relate :) thanks so much for the comment! I'll be fine kido. lol u know how it is. poetry is great for getting rid of feelings hey? :D love to hear more from u!!

ruthie

:'(....sad n touching! I love your style of writing, the rhymes and flow. Loved every bit of it!

YA girl that is beautiful.. I wish i could spend more time with my dad is funny we live in the same house.. We are so close but so far away.. Im gonna write a poem about it too hope you dont mind if i use your same tittle>?

O never mind i thought yo had a different tittle lol

An amazing poem really i like it so much:D
but at the end it became not clear, guess you should state how did the dad change..
but otherwise it has a good rythme and so nice:D
check my poems and give me your opinion :D:D

I liked how u didnt no wat happened at the end, however if u can try to make things up with ur dad (not that i no wats going on so sorry to intrude) please do, i lost my dad last month and i regret every second i didnt spend with him, well written poem tho

Sad poem hun but i luv it xxx keep writin these brill poems xxxx

I really like this poem it show a lot of love..and then it got sad in the end it was really good

I can relate to that poem. But with my mom not my dad. Its hard when those kind of things happen. If you ever need to talk I am always here. but anyways great poem

xx
chelsea

Sad.. i feel it. <3 great job