5/5 this is truly a work of art u are a fabulous poet of today. this is clearly written from the heart you let the readers see from your eyes what ur going through. well done keep writing

In the outside her scars are starting to show.
^ I think it should be "on" not "in"

THis was a very interesting poem. I liked how you used very short lines it really added effect. The poem struck me as kind of unique and I enjoyed the descriptions. I think the flow could be improved by more closly lengthed lines but it was still good. 5/5

Wow, this was gorgeous, i could see the poem clearly in my mine, it was so detailed and so beatiful, the flow was perfect, i would give you a 10/5 if i could, but they only go up to 5/5
i will definetely read more if i can.
luv gabriella

Wow. i like this mysterious. it was a really good poem. however, it lacked a strong structure in two parts: Just her falling with a hand reaching out for someone that one day will catch this poor girl.
and the second to last line.

nice poem. 4/5.

Nicely done!
Wonderful poem, I loved it ..
You have talent
Keep it up!
Best of wishes :)