Unforgotten

by Kaila   Mar 25, 2007


I hate this pain.
This loneliness.
You put me here.
Now I must confess.

I've loved you forever.
Now you love her.
What am I suppose to do?
This pains to much to endure.

You said you loved me,
but I was to young.
Screw you now,
it's over I'm done.

But I still love you.
And I don't want to any more.
I want to be ridden of this pain.
This love thing is a bore.

You never loved me anyways.
To busy loving her.
I was just some child,
and I'm left here feeling burned.

I'll never forget you though,
or the memories we had.
I'm still here waiting for you,
and I'm left here feeling sad.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    The flow on this was very good the message was real straight forward, but I see the folly of being young through out this poem which is not wrong it's just the old saying been there done that. Good write none the less keep it up Plot121

  • 18 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Awesome once again. Great flow, nice word choice, deep emtions great read 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Austin

    This is a heartwrenchin poem...i can relate except it was with my old girlfriend...everythings changed now...but still...wonderful poem loved it 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Teria

    I liked this poem as well. I don't think it's one of your best ( that I've read ) but, it was good.

    I think you should use a bit more punctuation through-out the poem. More commas, actually. There were a few places that needed them in order for the flow to be perfect; it was a bit off.
    But, you did a great job, great emotions and meaning.

    Keep it up.
    4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Wow, great one. I loved it:) 5/5

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