Very Good. I love the rhyming in this poem. Keep up the good writing. 5/5

That was a good poem. With the part

I'm sorry for my written dreams
For they don't mean a thing

Everything you write means something so dont let anyone tell you otherwise :)

Jochsey

Wow another good poem...no wait scratch the good great =) and im seeing ur titles to ur poems and wat genre and u lik to write dark poems dont u? thts kewlies u r very good at it keep it up..

Wow...VERY creative I must say so far this is the best poem I've read all day!! You did a wonderful job!! nicly done!

I hope I die in presence
Of the beauty found within
I hope that I don't find it
For that would be a sin

I wish to sing in silence
Between the pouring rain
Gasping calmly in suspense
But never from the pain
These two stanzas are so powerful, and are my favorite out of the entire poem. The word choice brillant, and the show of emtion is excellent.please keep up the good work.