My advice to you

by Kaetaj   Mar 26, 2007


How 'bout i give you some advice
it's like a pinch of sugar and spice
about the things you normally do
how many things can you do
to hurt somebody you really knew
try not to hurt others' feelings
and then nobody will try to hurt yours
do the right thing, it'll make you spring
and it'll come back to you
it's your path to choose
that's my advice to you

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Nicely done! I like how its short and to the point. It has a great message and it was delivered in a great way! The flow was smooth and the words were ok, over all, good job!