Even On Days Like This (Acrostic)

by Italian Stallion   Mar 27, 2007


Even on days like this
Validity is hard to come by
Even though my intellect is like
No one else's

Oh how I feel like
No one cares

Deep down inside
A heart so full of passion
Yet, afraid to
Show you my love

Loving you
Is an adventure
Kills me to know
Even that you don't care

This love I hold
Hovers over my heart
I want to provide for you
So much love and attention

© Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion

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Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title. Pretty straight forward, no rhyme scheme or syllable count.
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  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I love the first stanza as well. Beautiful word choice there. Good job on this form!

  • 17 years ago

    by Hatori

    Acrostic poems are usually my favorite type of poetry, and I can connect to this poem. I love the choice of words through this piece, particularly in this paragraph:

    Even on days like this
    Validity is hard to come by
    Even though my intellect is like
    No one else's

    Great job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I've been here and felt this maybe that's why I loved it so much this is my favorite great job!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Great jon on the acrostic. You like that style, huh? =] I know what it feels like to desire that. You are a great writer!

    Ciao~

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    This was really good. I love acrostics.
    Great job.

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