No hope

by firexdancer   Mar 28, 2007


I love your eyes
they seem to stare into my soul
but somehow you can't hear my cries
your heart is but a hole

i love your hands
they are so strong and so alive
as if they could shape the lands
without you i can't survive

you stand so tall
i try to hold on tight
but with you i am too small
why can't you be right

you are blind
i thought you'd see this heart of mine
but you have left behind
what's hidden deep inside

your walking all alone
giving me the rope
if only i could have known
you'd leave me with a broken heart, and take away my hope.

this poem was originally for a contest, but i also decided to put it on here. love gabriella

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very personal and emotional piece, it has greatly created atmosphere and it is unique. I like the way that you expressed your feelings, beautifully written but also sad. Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by iminlovewithhim

    I so luved dis poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Here you are girl
    She won a Third place with this
    I choosed this cos expression and wordig was so compatible
    And the feelings were inside it is a difficult thing to do
    So keep it up hun
    Your friend
    LauRa

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Oh the love, yet there is more to it. i know. its great to know that you put this poem on here too. cause i just read it. and i am glad i did. i enoyed it very much.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I thought this was a nicely penned poem, however it seemed a little bit jumpy. Anyway, it had a nice message and I enjoyed reading it very much.

    :)

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