:D cool stuff ^_^

Nice one =) i liked the sceme and the way u went back btween 4 and 2 line stanzas, they complimented each other very well in the context of the poem =) 5/5

This is so amazing!!!
im not even joking, this is seriously the best poem ive read in a long time!
the structure and rhymes were flawless, and oh my god, its just so totally beautiful... this is totally going into my faves :]
5/5

~Sandra

I found this poem very interesting. I love the imagination and use of words in the poem.

"When Hurricanes and Sand Storms Invade the Skies
and over masses of corpses linger hordes of Flies
and shattering earthquakes tear the World Apart
and all men fall with a broken heart"

This part stuck out. I seem to have interpreted the poem myself in another way. The language was amazing. You were focused. Metaphors were absolutely outstanding!

Such deep inner meanings and emotions. The flow of your poem was not even forced in there. It flowed vividly and smoothly.

All the rhymes in there [and there were a lot] were all put in there perfectly.

Your talent put me in Awe.

Amazing, just amazing.

[Voted 5]

_Sam

Not so captivating to me but the chosen words somehow impressed me so as the imagination...it bring one eerie scenario in my head, a great picture of catastrophe.. great job very soothable for a person who is experiencing vivid depression and sadness.

This is very good-If I din't know how it feels to be heartless and know people who are heartless/emotionaless...I would think it unrealistic. But this is very good:>

This was brilliant. The rhyme was well threaded into this piece and the use of imagery and metaphores in this poem were amazing. The only suggestion I have is if you use the appropriate punctuation marks within your stanzas, the poem will read much more smoothly. But on a whole, very well done :).

5/5

I love this poem i hope to read more

Wow intence.....nice poem