My Soul's Place

by AMoreMIo   Mar 30, 2007


I know theres this place
*deep down in my soul
I know theres no heartache
I must not let go

I know of this place
*which keeps me alive
I know of its red lace
Which keeps me tide inside

I know that this place
*is my only true stay
I know that its here to keep me inplace
Its joy which always replays

I know theres this place
*deep down in my soul
I know theres no case
For its hope which it bestows

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I can relate to this one, you have good choice of words through the whole piece and it's greatly written.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dance Girlie

    Very good. i like poems that rhyme, and this one did, and had nice flow to it.
    :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    This was a nice short piece. Very simple, which isn't always a bad thing. Although, I'm not sure I would have put this poem in the 'Dark Poems' section.

    Brad

    P.S. thanks for your vote and comment on my poem 'Something I Wish To Say', I'm glad you liked it, obviously, lol.

  • 16 years ago

    by Israfel

    Nice. It rhymed easily and the meaning was clear. Very good

  • 17 years ago

    by XsuicideXsexXscandalX

    Good job

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