Life Without You

by heather   Mar 30, 2007


Life without u would be like a dying river
life without u would be emptiness i have never discovered
it would be questions with no answers
it would be music with no dancers

without you it would be silence in the dark
it would be a fire with only a fading spark
it would be tears to no end
it would be pain that i might not ever comprehend

a destininy never found
voices but no sound
a crippled rose
plays but no shows

a lonely heart ready to love
pouring rain from above
stars with no skies
no chance to say goodbye

dying thoughts of you
scare me because im aware of what i might lose
seeing you leave or dissapear
is one of my worst terrifying fears
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i was thinking of what it might be like to lose someone i care about like one of my best friends. so my mind went balistiK and i sumhow wwrote this in like 4 min. lol. but ya....i love all my friends and family so much its hard to picture life without them. I love you guys!!!!

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  • 15 years ago

    by Forever

    I like the flow of the poem, well done!
    5/5
    ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Anthony smith

    This poem is excellent, considering you wrote it in 4 min. I thought it was a real good topic that you wrote on because I feel when you write about sometging that means a lot to you, then it shows in your writing. 5/5 - keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Maggie Joseph

    This is a really good poem....i mean REALLY GOOD! GOOD JOB!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany Klein

    Hey this is a kewlie poem...

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