Read em and Weep

by Linden   Mar 31, 2007


Just playing cards
In the sand
Moving closer
Hold her hand

Make her happy
Make her cry
Tell her secrets
Tell her why

Just to see her
Makes your legs go weak
Playing cards
Read em and weep

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this.
    I thought it was sweet and though it was short, it was filled with emotion.
    Beautiful work!

  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Lol kewlies poem short but it made me smile..but luv is way more complicated than a card game...good poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    OoOoOoOo...
    Me likey.... A Lot!!!
    That was so sweet to read! =]
    The flow was great & your word usage was superb.

    "Make her happy
    Make her cry
    Tell her secrets
    Tell her why"

    ^ My favorite stanza. So intense for something so short. Wonderful job, keep writing! 5/5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

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