Your poem is great and can you read mine please cheers.

Aaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww this is so sweet! even sweeter than sugar!!!! i really liked it

Wow nice poem. i like it alott.. keep up the good work.

Soooo CUTE! 20/10

Really gud poem

Nicee work. This is super sweet. It flowed well. I like this write alot. Its short, but meaningful. Great job! 5/5

This was such a beautiful poem. I love the style and the diction was really strong. Your emotions are so clearly expressed here, I can really relate to what you're saying. Keep it up. Nik

This is a beautiful poem but is sad at the same time because you truly adored her and she is no longer yours. Written well, 5/5. Em