My Seclusion

by kiara   Apr 1, 2007


Lingering thoughts roam my mind
Dying passions run around blind
In Solitude things change
Thoughts of words become strange

Every echo strikes an emotion
From terror to insane devotion
In darkness lights appear
And the past can call back an old tear

So leave me in my dark seclusion
For once the door is pushed ajar
Its death to my happy illusion
And the fall of my only star

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  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    Thats so sad but very well written.= )
    Cory

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Wuuuu i want more!!!! :) i love it!!!! and i want to read more :) this a beautifull poem with a great flow i give it 99/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    In Solitude things change
    Thoughts of words become strange

    ^^^
    I like the depth of these 2 lines.
    Interesting read Kiara!

    You have been tagged in R.T.V.W hun just in case you didn't know.
    Take care
    Luane

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very sad and lonely thoughts.

    Lingering thoughts roam my mind
    Dying passions run around blind
    In Solitude things change
    Thoughts of words become strange

    This stanza really touched me.
    Take care Cindy

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