The Secret I Will Keep

by Linden   Apr 1, 2007


I see you everyday
We walk to class a lot
We know each other as friends
But my heart is what you've got

I could never tell you
I am too afraid
Our friendship is too great
That's why I delayed

Dreaming of a could be
That will never come
Waking in a reality
The dream ends with the sun

I can't and I won't
Be the one to say
I love you for always
Do you love me the same way?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was beautiful...
    I loved the first stanza, it was a beautiful opener.
    The flow was good throughout, the wording was pretty and I loved the ending.

  • 18 years ago

    by @ly

    Try singing it you will find its good

  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Awwww....i like this poem its very nice..plus i dont think it should b secret..just find oyut if he likes u back..or she..keep on writing =)

  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    I think tht this is too short...more poeticiveness..more details...feels like this is general in a sense..but its still good..

    welcome to the club...i think i will b enjoying reading your poems and qoutes,reading how you feel and i'll b giving you lots of comments so don't b annoyed if i put too much comments....and if u ever need someone to talk to..im here =)

    Jazzy

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow, hun.
    That was really sweet... though a tad sad. Hehe...that rhymed... lol.'
    The flow was flawless & your emotions were very strong.

    "I see you everyday
    We walk to class a lot
    We know each other as friends
    But my heart is what you've got"

    ^ My favorite stanza & a wonderful way to open up the poem! 5/5 Keep writing!

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

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