Hun, that was heartbreaking. No matter how many poems I read by you - your talent for writing never stops amazing me. =] The poem was wonderful, as always. Keep writing! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

*Does A Dance* Yay! I was first to comment! Lol.

This is nicely writen cindy, only thing i could see wrong was the first sentence of the last stanza, dont know, i could be wrong, but great poem, another 5/5!!!

I hope this isn't true Cindy!
You don't deserve to be going through something like that!
But as always, you've created a poem that shows your feelings and allows other to relate and feel with you
(I'm sure i could have phrased that better =)
5/5
*Gem*

When will people understand they are not the only ones with feelings? *hugs* for you gurl! another wonderful piece, keep your head up and smile :) xox sam

I know what you mean here & it really hurts. I just hope that things get better than this, i guess anything would be better than this.

all the best and take care
very well written though

Sad and beautifully penned.Each poem of yours reflects such intense human emotions that simply amazing.

Staring you walk away
Taking pieces of my heart
Not much left to share
It's cracked and broken apart.

Very heart touching .

Take care
chavii.

Sad and loving! 5/5

Amazing

WOW i really like this, it's plain and simple, yet it gets the point across.

Hey cindy ur poem was touching loved it..

The ache and pain in this is so visible -especially the last lines. they hit home.

peace
shobhana

I LOVE this poem. It probably meant something different to me than it did to you. I am sorry about your husband. But your a terrific writer keep it up..

Oh my gosh, this was so sad. Who would ever do this to you? You seem like such a sweet person. This was heartbreaking.
Take care.

Very sad but nicely put together. Another good job!

Cindy, this was so sad. It always hurts when the people we love let us down. But they are not worthy of you. You have such a pure, beautiful heart.

Very good poem, I loved it ,you are a good writer and I like the way you keep it plain and simple, but I understand what you going through, and it's hard ,I know, was told a year and a half ago that I had a bone disease and there was no cure, so hang in there sweetie my prayers are with you

thanks again, Tracy

Very good poem, I loved it ,you are a good writer and I like the way you keep it plain and simple, but I understand what you going through, and it's hard ,I know, was told a year and a half ago that I had a bone disease and there was no cure, so hang in there sweetie my prayers are with you

thanks again, Tracy

Hi. i like this poem. it reminds me so much of myself and this past year. 5/5

It is lovely and soooo sad..