I thought you did an excellent job ,and why would anyone laugh ? keep it up, thank you for your comment on mine,I will try to work my way through your others.

Nice poem, well done

Its good just different from a soldiers perspective...

Very good and the title is very attractive and makes you want to read it. This poems great, 5/5

Great poem... my fiance is a soldier in the army so it was very relatable to me, and it's very sad as well... but more then that's it's just a very good tribute to any soldiers, past and present. Very nice work!