Wow, good poem. Very sad tho. The flow was excellent and a lot of emotion was put into it.
Good job 5/5

:Sarah:

Aww
good job!
5/5

That was amazing it was as if i was in the story soo well written and very well set i loved it to bits-5/5

This is an amazing poem sweetie, and I really hope it's not based on your truth...but I'm guessing it probably is

It's not your fault he's gone, and people touching you is definitely not something you should have to put up with. Tell someone. When they ask...tell them the truth. Your daddy wouldn't want to see you hurt like this, and he'd tell you to tell the truth.

But it IS hard telling the truth, and if you ever need a friend...you can PM me and we can talk

Again, an amazing poem. Well done

Starsnsmiles xxx

This is one of the best poems i have ever read its amazing!

I love this poem it made me very sad I thought of my father hes been gone since I was 7 and I miss him alot so I felt the emotion in that poem 5/5

Thats cool paige i really love it.. It was great! Keep up the good work!

Very good poem. You did a spectacular job, but in my opinion you could have done without saying "daddy" at the end of every other line. Not trying to be negative or anything. However I DO get the point and purpose of it and thats great but I was just giving my honest opinion in case you wanted it :) But other then that I think it was very well written and you have some talent. Keep it up, I gave it a 5/5! Also I'd LOVE it if you would read a few of my poems and comment/RATE them. Thanks a lot!!
Rachel

Wow what a sad poem but so good....i really liked everything about it

5/5

Noelle

Oh my..this is really awesome yet very very sad..i feel you in your poem and its very touching....hope evrythin turns out fine wit you..tc always..5/5..well i like the way how u point out the "daddy's word"..it emphasize how much youve lost after he was gone and how badly u need and miss him to protect you and cuddle you..

This was very touching, sad, and hopefully not true, but likewise well written. truly emotional, nice job :)