Courage in a wakeful daze

by A girl broken until   Apr 2, 2007


I wrote this after a really mega scary dream i had, u may not like it but it has a really special meaning to me.

The dreams are coming back,
Should i be scared like last time,
or will my courage shine through my life.
Will i light up the night,
or will the darkness swallow me and my dreams.
Will it take all hope,
or leave me with just the warm fuzzy feeling i get when im near the people i love.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just Jade

    Hey lorenzo ... have you told me bout this dream? i liked it besides the fuzzy bit ... you know how i dont like fuzzy.

    Anyways coz where on the topic of dreams I had the scariest freakin dream eva and the most hilarious thing was that the scary thing in it didn't even scare me. I turned it all around on her. Haha. I'll tell you about it next time I c u but heres a sneek peak ... someone gets killed by a nail gun, creepy cottages with kids - they were weird and this old woman with no eyes and had black holes ...
    i woke up and annie was pawing my face and i was like "dude get a life"
    anyways ill cya on monday

  • 18 years ago

    by Black night

    Loved it, was great. nothin more to say. Could relate to it totally.
    short but sweet.
    5/5 again - your good at this writing lark
    -Black night-

  • 18 years ago

    by TRUTH hurts

    Sounds kinda wishy washy, not sure what to think of it. hmm yea. maybe write more

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