I LOVE THIS POEM! you are such a greeat poet. nice job hun

Gasttlee
Very dark and sad thoughts put into this piece.

I have no regrets,
for in actuality the day I died
was also the day
I was born.

This stanza really makes you think.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

This is great, but i have to disagree with you somewhere. You express yourself more than me.

Very good poem, incredible imagery, I like the topic, it's very unique and well written.
-I became darkness itself.
I became a shadow
like none ever seen.- powerful stanza.
5/5

Wow... I don't know what else to say. It's just wow... It's so dark, and powerful. It's a great poem.

That was very nice! the last lines were great!

Hey hey, very awesome, keep it up

Very dark and very powerful piece. Great write. 5/5

marcella

Wow.
You know when I read really good dark poetry, especially when it talks of alcohol, I think of Edgar Poe.
No Lie.
he's amazing. (:
Lol, anyway.
I thought of him when reading this.
And, that says a lot from me...

Wow! real intense stuff, loved this poem, even no there is no rhyming structure it flows perfectly and portrays a very good story.

well done mate.

5/5

Gary.

Wow wat a sad poem
keep up the good work!
i felt the sadness of this poem

<3 i love you silly

Hmm....kinda sounds like me.

Very powerful. Chilling. Mysterious.

I drowned in darkness
like a sick drunk
diving in the ocean.
^^^
I love how you compared it to this. It makes you think of how you would feel before you die