Gone

Wonderful poem! I can relate I had 4 deaths withn 2 years. Anyways, Keep writing poems your really good at it!

"now sitting here crying on the ground
me crying is the only sound
i lay here beside your grave
but without you i cant be brave"

Loved it, but be careful on the punctiation, thats all I have to say. 5/5
~Br0k3n

I can relate to this at the moment.
When you lose someone you care for so much, i found crying and unanswered questions were all i heard for a long time..
5.5
*Gem*

I love your poem it is so sad you touched my heart it was lovely great work

This is a sad poem , but very well written.

Take care
chavii.