I like this poem.. i think pain is a gain.. it helps you in the future if u make it through

Whoa, nice. a bit tongue tied but yeah. loved it, love your style of writing.

5/5 David

I liked the structure on this and you got a load of good points across to the reader
Great piece
5.5 Marcus

VERY INTERESTING POEM GOOD JOB

I like this one...its sad, but interesting and well penned!...great poem...5/5...your friend......*Melody*....all the best...:)

I believe pain is gain...very good...i like your writing a lot...agian...thanks for your comments

BabyGurl

If ppl didn't know pain, then todays society would be nowhere... good job

This poem is great! keep up the good work!

Pain
is a gain
after every complain.
^Huh. Nicely done. Maybe you could put together "pain" and "is a gain" tho..it might help the flow..

Your suffering hurts
whereas gain supports.
^I had to reread this twice to get it but once I did I liked it. Well done.

Every torment is informal
while increase is normal.

Your past tribulation
is future determination.
^Very true.

Distress is sour.
Growth is power.
^Here, and in the next stanza, I would remove the first period in the first line of each stanza, it doesn't work with the rest of the poem and isn't really needed.

Agony is a nuisance.
Expansion is an influence.

Hardship is a burst
synthesized for the worst.
^Even if I don't agree with this, well worded lol.

Gain is a compliance
for your own guidance.

You acquire the force of a lion,
for your spirit's never dying.
^This is very powerful. The force of it is shocking, bravo.

Despite every drop of rain,
do you believe pain
is gain?
^Haha, again, you could probably put "do you believe pain" and "is gain?" together and make the whole poem flow consistantly..but its just my opinion. This was a perfect ending to this poem. Lovely job. (: