Its a superb dark poem , i hope all its contents including cutting is fiction though.
Stay well and write more.

Take care
chavii.

I created this poem because i know alot of people that go through depression and the many things that go along with it. I myself have had a problem with cutting. I find myself out of that condition however it is very tempting to go back to that when things go horribly wrong. I am positive i would go back to cutting and I believe i would be dead by now if my best friend, Phylicia, hadnt helped. So i thank her. My precious darling who helps me whenever i need it!

Great poem , you did and outstanding job and I enjoyed reading , hope to see more , please keep up the good work,,tracy 5.0

I love this poem. im going through almost the same thing at the moment. 5/5

All I see is blood upon the floor,
I shift to wards the blood stained door.
I grasp the handle and hope for the best.
Maybe this is Devil's own test.

i love it.
no one understands that feeling unless they have felt it. and anyone who hasnt cant imagine what it can do to a person. keep up the good writing.

-xox-

I loved this poem its well written and I dont I guess just darker poems appeal to me but this was a great poem like almost everyone said keep up the good writing
carly

Omg 5/5 love it...this 1 if verry good.. i can really relate to it.. except i didnt drown myself yett...

High intensety.. i love it..notm uch mor i can say but i enjoyed the read!

Hey juss wanna say this a bloody awsum poem so much like me lol

the best bit was 'is this the devils test' that bit i have always asked myself xx

Wow... amazing flow of words... T
The combination of words you used to express the emotion is great..
Nicely written..

Beautiful poem. much felt emotion. thanks for the comment. keep up the good workk :-)

This poem is amazing.. I'm hopeing its not true tho.. It's just so fully of emotion... xx

Wow.

nice write.

i loved it.

thanks for commenting my poem :P

Amazing poem! I really enjoyed it.
I can't find many sad poems that impact me lately but this one did, thank you.

P.S. - thank you for comenting.

-Lizzi