Broken inside

by Broken Inside He only wants to hurt me   Apr 5, 2007


I knew her well
She inspired me
But now she is gone nowhere to be found

It's been almost three or four years now
I don't bother to keep track
For if I do
I'd probably snap

For she inspires me
In the most creative ways
I wonder where I'd be now
If she was still here

So I thank her now
For all the inspiration

I cry at night
Only out of despair and desperation

Her memory never long gone
I tell myself to hang on
So here is a tribute to her memory
For all to see

I thank god for all my memories
And her love for me
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This is a tribute to my grandmother. She died a few years ago but she is still very close in my memory. I Love her all to much. She helped me to become who I am now. Sorry if it s all jumbled together.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    This was a very good poem. I really love reading tribute poems because it lets me take a look at someone through the eyes of another. I can tell that you and your grandmother were really close, but the hurt will stop in time and then something else will inspire you. The only thing I have to critique on is the category I dont think that sadness really fits this one because it was more longing and missing I didnt really get sadness as a feeling. Nice work though.

  • 16 years ago

    by Yuna

    I found this poem so true and feelingsome. It reminded me of my grandmother. She was very special to me, so thank-you for writing this, because it brings back good memories. It must feel pretty good to you. You're very nice to write a tribute to your grandmother. I love the way you set up this poem. It naturaly falls into place as the poem progresses. Very Great job with this one!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This poem is really good. i loved reading it. thank you so much for your comments they really give me a reason to keep writing. hopefully i will be able to post more, but i can't now. thanx again. shanik

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Loved it!!.great penmanship!...and an excellent way of paying tribute to sum1..well
    chosen words!...and the flow was beautiful too...
    Kp it up!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a very good tribute but the sad thing about it was you gave the reader no picture in thier mind of who you tributed this poem for. I think if you closed it by saying something about her by name or title the work would be more meaningful. Just a thought Plot121

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