Beautiful poem.
Full of deep emotions.
The rhime, the words, it's perfect.
I loved reading it.

Simply great!

This is wonderful poem nd i love the emotions nd hard work put into it keep up the good work

Hey, this poem is really goood. Very sad and deeep.

Nice write. A sad picture of the abounding love. A poison that kills. If this is you, read some of my poem for some insights in self love. 5/5

A great poem every line exudes with emotion trauma of jilted love could not have been expressed better.

Cindy;

That is exactly how it feels. My wife and true love of the last 8 years left me, and when I read your poem, EXACTLY how I am feeling! Great job on this one. Real, true, and painful. Hope you are not feeling like that now. God bless you!
kevins365

I loved how you brought back in the begininng into the end...(midnight train)... it really brought it all together:)

Wow... i've never read a poem Like this...
i Like your poem....
gLeizza

So very well written, my dear friend.

Fantastic poem ever, Well done Cindy

WOW all i can really say is dat i love diz poem my top favorite so far love it, it really touched me and i can relate to sum of da things u were sayin..........Really GREAT job...

Oh this poem is awesome! i know how you feel!
its not right that you had to go through this
your truely an excellent writer!

Wow very good and deep yea i know its hard that hopefully they will realize that its hard without them ad u try to explain but theres no way to at times cause u try to catch ur breath when u hear their voice or when u see them.
Keep ur head up and be strong hopefully they will come around ....

CINDY REALY GOOD 5/5

A one big applause to you.. you made me cry hun...

This is a very good poem cin...i really like it..
sad tho..i love u

I love this!! It is a beautifully written poem. You are one of my favorite poets. Please comment on mine so I can know if other people like them. Thanks!!!

Wow i was captivated... the whole stanza are truly expressed the great emotion. specially i was enjoyed the last lines....... very impressive and fabulous work 5/5

Hey Cindy, how have you been? i hope you remember me, i used to narcissa?!? your writing just keeps getting better, its as if your poems swallow me! i get lost in them!

you really are a truely great writer! thanks for all the inpiration you have given me!

all my love

narc xxx