Its reallly a superp poem... you have writen it very perfactly you have used excallent words...u have described it so well.. to b frank my eyes got wet we i read it... its becos i also have been tru such feelings.

Sitting alone in this midnight train
Traveling in my daily nightmares
Looking out the bleeding window
Haunting memories pasted in layers...

i like those lines very much cos i had tried to write a poem like this but i was unable to discribe.... your whole poem is fantastic...
i have submited only very few poems... take a look at it wen u have time..keep it up...

mohd

Great job u 2 excellent love poem

I think this poem is just great! It's like a story...it tells your emotions and you can feel the pain! Great job!
~AboveTheCrowd
AKA-Kayla

Were you listening to music when u wrote this?

This is such a good poem. It is one of the best love poems that i have heard in a long time. Your verses made me feel as if i was alone and depressed. This is truly great poetry!

Great Job
Libby K.

Wow, so beautiful, feels like a prayer, very spiritual; I tend to use lots of rhymes to make it appeal to the ear but yours has very few rhymes if any at all but is still very charming 5/5

Awsome poem

Congratulations sweetie.....you deserve every bit of this success.

Champagne Time... :o))

Eat my leg and have my feet at dinner...lololol

Cindy, dear, what a heartbreaking piece. Your skills for imagery are very nice. I love this piece, and what a nice collab! Congrats to you and your partner in writing this!

Take care.

Wow , this is sad, but awesome...check out my poems....

OMG..this poem made me cry so hard. it touched my heart. This is the exact and by exact i mean EXACT way i feel right now...this is the way i feel about a guy i still love but he won't even look at me anymore.
if you don't mind...would it be ok..if i gave this poem to him...to show him i need him here with me...i want to be with him again?
Thank you so much
5/5 from me...beautifully written...

if you get the chance..comment ona couple of mine too
Thanks much!
~love~
~Shannon~

This is beautiful i love it! I can totally relate you shoud read my new poem scared, it is on the same topic i know you'll like it! keep it up cuz you are now on my favorites!

I love this poem it is very touching

No faith in god no trust in love....like that
xx

...well...just perfect...not a poem...a real emotion...

Cindy,
Nice poem, brings out the anguish with great level of genuine feel.
The last four lines seem a bit out of place, though.
Regards,
Ravi

Cindy,
this poem is fabulous.what can i say about this poem.a beautiful piece.the ryhming was good.the flow was also good.5/5
great work
hope we stay in touch!!!

Wow i wish i can one day be half as good as you. You are one of the few inspirations in my writing you really know how to express your feeling in words something i would love to be able to do.....better
just me
-laura-

Im speechless

Nice 5/5
see mine please
*going suicical .. *
read that one tell me what u thinks