Beautiful piece. 5/5

[tragic]

I absolutely love the imagery, and choice of complex wording that you used in this poem, its a very good poem, i give this one a 5/5!!! keep up the good work!!!!

Wow, you're pretty good. =) I think I may add you to my favorites, and it takes a lot to make it onto my favorites haha. I really liked this poem, no scratch that, I LOVED this poem! You had amazing imagery and I could just picture everythign you said, the flow was a bit choppy at parts but not bad, and the end really took my breath away, I loved the way you ended this. The title is what made me really want to read it too haha, I liked the title. Anyways, enough of my blabbing...great job! ^_^

5/5

It's so sad :( Nice word of choice! I like the ending in this poem :) very tragic. good job! keep writing 5/5! it

The structure of this was beautiful the words and the line length was amazing.. I loved everything about this one. Nothing at all to critique on.. and the last line was amazing so very powerful.

It actually felt as is you were writting about me... Nice job!!!

Josie