That was really good ....we think at first maybe you guys had a fight....but in the end it wasnt you two that broke your friendship but the fault that someone else did by shooting this friend...really good ....

Awww this is sad...and good!! you did an excellent job!

How very sad but written with so much love. Keep writing.
Take Care Cindy

This poem is filled with mystery tragedy and sadness yet it ends with a mystical hope

This is sad
very well writen
take care

A sad write but at the same time very well written.Brought a tear to my eye ,and although taken from me in a different way it made me think of my best friend.

Excellent poem. As a widower I can imagine the pain of losing someone who is your closest friend.

Your poem was very well written and very emotional ..i give ita 5/5 and thank your for commenting my poem

I like the theme, but I think it was structurally weak. It doesnt have a rise of suspense and a gental fall, its just kind of limp.

{4/5}

[PygmyPuff]

Nicely written, get right to the main point. Keep up the good work.

Is this true?
cuase sometime
people write on true things
and some people just make them up.

Oo but it was good :]

Saddning =(
But good! It's a well written poem!
5/5!

Sad.. but its a great poem! I enjoyed reading it :)

Wow...this is really good poem. good job and keep it up.
from K

I don`t know if this is based on a true story but I lost a young friend once too,It hurts . I wrote about it too its called "Danny" if you would like to read it. very good write.

Awww. this reminds me of my friend, well written. its humbling! Thanks for the comments, i just love reading your poems!

I really love this pem and i knw how this stuff feels like it kinda suxs and the only thing to look foward to is u may see each other again

Absolutely amazing i love love love the way its written and how its a sad poem but its optimistic too great job!

thanks for the comment on mine

-DaddysLittlePrincess

"My one and only true friend
Vanished without saying good bye
Just because of
The bullet of a gun"

^^ I certainly didn't see that coming, I thought this was just going to be about a broken friendship, that was a surprising twist.

I loved the emotion in this, by the time I finished reading, I had tears in my eyes.

I found the flow to be good for the most part but shaky in a couple of places.

Try eliminating some of the fillers (I, and, you, etc) and you'll find the flow goes so much smoother.