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by Y A R L I N   Apr 5, 2007


We met in spanish class last year
i thought that you were kool
i called you everyday
we became good friends

Then over the summer of '06'
we became BFF's
we talked 24/7
loved to be with each other

Then the school year came
met new friends
saw some old ones
at that moment, we grew apart

You were with new peoples
i was left in the dust
we grew apart instantly
you were vanished from my heart

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  • 17 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    Ok I hope you can take criticism. Your idea behind this poem is a good one. You are also young so your writing isn;t advanced. If I were you I would avoid saying stuff like "Kool" in your poems. BUT if you use writing as an outlet for stress then I suppose you can do whatever you want eh?

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