Very good I love a story .

Ohhh.
I liked it, a lot.
Especially the last stanza.
Quite a good job, keep it up. :]

Beautifull dark chilling....FeEl LiKe GiViNg Up

Wow O.O that was great Marsha =) I loved it ^.^
5/5 lol
Take care and thanks for being my friend =)
Rhea

I loved it Marsha..

The flow was great, and the words awesome, the imagery was amazingly good. I loved the story..

*Curiosity Killed me*
^ I loved this.
Great job,
Elainex

Wow excellent poem, i love how u wrote it n everythin.. great work.. keep writin 5/5
xx

I liked the imagedry and the idea that this event [which im sure wasnt in real life you killing someone lol] deadend you inside and how its the tortue within that hut you well thats what i read into it :)

This was good kept me reading though couldnt get into it as it didnt really flow, however good job

Wow. this made me shudder! great poem, doll