by Curry Apr 6, 2007
category :
Internet slang /
sadness
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Shes laying face down in the dirt, |
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Crys |
by CHOKE
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In the beginning this poem reminded me of "face down" by the jumpsuit apparatus. was it your inspiration in any way love? some of the rhyming schemes seemed really forced but overall great write love. 4/5. |
by David
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Well done on this. you seem to be able to write many poems. and no two close to being the same. well wat i have read. |