Comments : A FRIEND IS SOMEONE

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great poem ,good wording and flow was good , did a great job, keep it up your friend Tracy dean 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ajmal

    Its amazing....

  • 16 years ago

    by LiNa

    Great poem i loved it sound like me and my friend but i loved ur wording and i think u should write more i think u would be really good if u wrote more like this.

  • 16 years ago

    by dee

    Great message.. good flow. i loved it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    Awe. I love this. it's very cute and true and I can tell it comes from the heart. One thing that would help it though, is if you use less slangy words. Like *thought* instead of *thot*, etc. you know, just an opinion. other than that, i loved it. Keep writing!! hope to read more soon!! 5/5

    ` Liz =]

  • 16 years ago

    by oddi tea

    It really is a great poem but I find the slang a bit distracted. A perfect candidate for slang poetry and I like your work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    ReallY aN amazinG joB oN thE poeM! iT floweD nicelY, yoU arE sO talenteD thE waY yoU writE. >>>>>>> excellenT writE..

    luzaN

  • 16 years ago

    by ali

    This is soo sweet and true
    one of those poems you read and then you smile inside!!!
    keep it up!
    5/5
    x

  • 15 years ago

    by Concrete Angel

    Great.... You are absolutely right A friend is some1 Who is with us in our good times and bad times..... Good job keep it up.......:-)

  • 15 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    Great job keep up eith the good work!!!!! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Great poem. I am sure you are a good friend also because you know what it takes to be a friend. Kel.

  • 15 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    Good poem, bit slangy haha but great meaning and vibe!!!
    well done :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yes that is what friends are for and they are
    always there no matter the time or day. Liked
    the read :)