A very different view of the wind
And i liked it. The repetition didn't get tiresome, it fitted in very well.
And the different antics are what everyone can relate to and have probably experienced first hand! lol
Excellent =)
5/5
*Gem*

This was nicely written, but i think you could do without so much parallel structure.

The thing that makes your dress goes wild...<< its go.

nice job. <3 thanks for the comment.

This poem would be better
If you write down another ending.
The ending you have on right now
Isnt really much...

Very nice and the title is very simple too. I'd say great work and 5/5 keep up the good work :D

The repetition didn't work for this one to me. It kinda...I don't know defeats the purpose. You've got to watch out for the plurals and things like that:
"The thing that blow you back in your race" blow=blows

Otherwise I like it except for the ending. Not the grand "finale" it could be but not bad either. It seems like it should go in nature.
~Faith-less

I think that i would like this poem even better with a different ending, but other than that, I like the idea of it. Even though the sentences were repeated a lot, it kept me interested thinking "what'll happen next?" That is truly a hard thing to do. This piece tells a lot of truth, so I just wanna say, great job!
Hatori
alovetoodeeptoforget

This is awesome way different then anything i have read on this site great job and thx for the comment

keenan

Thats very creative writing , good job wallace.

Good poem

Nicely written Wallace.....I agree with Andrea....good nature piece!

Hey very good imagiation,keep it up

This one is cute I like it.