Great poem...

Great poem, with a great message.. 5/5 from me, and thanks for the comment!!

You know it would be a great world if everyone could unite. Makes you really think. Good job!
Take Care Cindy

GREAT JOB!

I think you tried to force this on a little bit. The flow was off and the wording that you had going on didn't make any sense.

Very patriotic towards the human spirit its just such a pity that pride and greed ruin it :(
you did VERY wel in writing this :) i loved reading it :))

A lovely poem. i loved:
"
Our world is a collection
joined by connection.

This planet is ours
in our own powers."

This piece man is so confusing. I must not be a good poet. Alot of what people right I have no idea what it means =( I think im retarded!! Im going to miss having english class with the clown we had. Definately keep writting and keep in touch. Chris...

Great poem, although a thought it was a little too straight forward, like your actually talking to someone, when it should rather show the deepness of poetry, nice work. Thanks for commenting on my poem.

Excellent!

the usage of words were very powerful, so unique style..amazing poet!

keep it up!

Muy Excelente! Good Job

Idk about this poem at first i didnt under stand it. i guess it had something to do with the wording but the more you read it the more sense it makes...idk if that is a bad thing though.... i like it more and more everytime.

Your form of writing is so well recognized, is your signature writing and it makes the poems you write very unique, it's a solid poem and the message behind it is amazing.