Ok, I really liked this poem i think it had a great meaning behind it. One thing i thought was some of the lines were either too long compared to others or too short i dont think it threw the flow of though which is good so other then that this was an interesting read. Well done ~mel

I liked this poem alot. I think you did a good job in writing it. Keep up the good work!!!!
5/5

~Chelsea

Amazing meaning you put behind this poem. I read it over a few times, and I was impressed on exactly how much meaning you put into one poem. Certainly and interesting topic... I liked how you put the idea of harbored mishaps of memories, into a imagry form of a locked box.

This is another great poem of yours. It was another wonderful read. 5/5

Kalee

Amazing. I love the locked box reference. the structure is perfect.

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[PygmyPuff]

The metaphor in this poem is simply brilliant. You're a complete genius.

Good Job, I really liked this one =))