You Are

by Rachel RTVW   Apr 9, 2007


You are the brush to the canvas,
stroking on hue.
The early morn awakening,
dropping the dew.

You are the warm beams of sun,
lighting my day.
Right there beside me,
nights when I pray.

You are the soft falling rain,
showering down love.
Graceful yet swift,
like wings of a dove.

You are the calm gentle breeze,
Freshness of air.
Caressing my face,
Fingers through hair.

You are the beauty of roses,
blossoming red.
The rock of strength,
when the path's hard to tread.

You are the twinkle of galaxies,
traveling afar.
Dancing through heaven ,
as I wish on a star.
You are.........................

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    I liked this poem as well. but i think you should have put another you are in it befor you typed teh last you are. it feel like it still needed a line or two. but still wonderfully written great flow as well

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good love poem, I might use that for my girl, nice job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom K

    Rachel... I just want you to know I have come back to this one several times and each reading I find more and more to love about it. You paint a wonderful picture of your feelings,, thank you darlin for sharing it with us.

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Awhh this is really sweet. i can definetly see why people rate it so high because it is a wonderful poem. it definetly gets a 5/5 from me!

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Love this poem Rachel....so beautifully written and romantic...

    You are the twinkle of galaxies,
    traveling afar.
    Dancing through heaven ,
    as I wish on a star.
    You are.........................

    I love these lines.....5/5

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