Comments : Maybe

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara

    Powerful poem! nice job though! nicely writen! lol but a bit long, but thats ok!---tara

  • 16 years ago

    by LiNa

    Long freaking poem but every word i loved and felt was true i loved it and i would really like if u would write more.great job.

  • Wow!That was a really long poem but it was powerful and I can really relate.It was nicely written but maybe you should put it into stanzas.Keep up the great work.5/5^-^

    <3AMBER

  • 16 years ago

    by Ms.Sweets

    I swear you wrote this poem
    from the thoughts in my head...
    like omg that was one F-ing long azz poem but it was unbelievable
    how much It reminded me
    of me
    I was like wow...I hope you can come to me as a friend I would really like that because I know exactly how you feel. I have the same issues & tragic thoughts as you.

  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    Very long by I joy to read...well done!!! I loved it so much 5/5