Ahh, we all feel rejection at times, but i guess its life, and we all go through it sometime in life. but we get over it. This poem was okay, i suggest that you maybe put it in verses? it would flow alot better taht way, and make it easiter to read.
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all in all, pretty good.
kaitlynx.

Im not sure who rated this poem with a 4 but they dont know what their talkin about, this poem was great, it had a lot of emtion in it and also i can relate for i liked a guy once but he liked my friend and that hurt a lot so i know where you're coming from, very well written

Oh pants. i forgot to comment!
this is pretty nice. simple, but still effective.
i actually love the title and how it's incooperated into the poem. it's a nice concept overall, but there's room for improvement in how you portray your ideas with a little bit more .. sophistication? diligence? i'm not sure on the right word really.
you're a lovely writer, just keep learning.
L.x

Oh, very deep
greatly written a great poem, although this is my first time reading you, but i realized that you are a talented poet...
keep up the great work, and i will be back for reading more of your master pieces.

a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it

Great poem.. i really felt the emotion! the flow was not really great. but i dont really care about flow.. as long as it comes from the heart.

I can relate. I like this poem. The emtions were strong and clear. You did a really great job once agian. I love your work 5/5