Life in the eyes of the ones that gone thru it (not me)

by maricary   Apr 9, 2007


Our lives are gradually changing turning into things unwanted feeling things you never felt and hoping for something that is so much better,

but find that there is nothing but a turning hell that has just come to view but i look away and try to walk to heaven how hard is it to see the things that are so far away,

tossing into a pan of discomfort and cruel life unsuspecting this cruel injustice brought upon you so hard is it to do what you please and to make something of yourself and find that all you do is make more pain for yourself and then you see that the more you try the harder it gets,

but the more that you do nothing it is still hard and you think what to do with your life to make it better and you come to a conclusion and find the answer is only to try and do your best because all life is is discomfort and all you have to do is make the best of it.

made by: Jackie

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  • 18 years ago

    by maricary

    I like your poem it is very awsome i love the way you write it is very deep XD

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