Why Do You Have To Leave

by Kalee   Apr 10, 2007


This is a poem I wrote when I was only 12. Well it is supposed to be a song, but I don't think it is any more. Hope you like it.
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Why do you have to leave?
You were the best boy in the world
A lot of people will miss you
And I will miss you
More then anyone else in the world
Every time I see you
I wish that you wont go
Every time I hear you
I wish that you will never go
I loved you the first time I saw you

SO PLEASE DON'T GO!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by JR13

    I feel you on this one. not bad for age 12 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Ah that "missing" feeling is never good. tis a tad sad really :(

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    I like this poem alot. Nice job. 5/5

    ~Chelsea

  • 17 years ago

    by CarissalRADIOFACEl

    Yet another wonderfully mind boggling piece. That's a lot to feel at 12. I was still taping up pictures of Harry Potter at that age. XD So, you were definately a bit more mature than me. Great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I give this a 4 out of 5 because of the emotion behind it i found that to be nicely written but i dont know i cant give it a 5 sorry hun. Good effort tho. ~mel

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