This is a wikd poem. im far frm religious but i can c the depth nd meanin in it. kp ritin.

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Ohhh Hallelujah Becca this is amazing!! *tear*..You know, Its SO hard to find other teens unashamed to write about their faith in CHrist or witness about him and I am so glad I come across your poem! This was so beautiful and so true. I loved this and dont stop spreading the faith girl!!
Chelsey

Thanks for your comments on my poems!

This is indeed a great dedication and a very beautiful message. I hope people really see the hope which you have shown out here.

all the best and take care

Thank you for your kind words on my poem.
God is awesome! and this poem is awesome!
I cried (in a good way) just reading this
so true, so real, he is our true one, our powerful god!
so beautifully written
god bless you.
Sarah xxx

Wow this is a very beautiful poem, nice flow. You are very talented, the wording and everything is great! This is now going to be another favorite poem of mine. 5/5

I really like this one!!!

Perfect dedication... ilove this kind of poetry. its rarely and very fabulous work. to be honest it really touch my heart hope some readers would really impress ur work! great words,great flow, and great dedication for everyone! thanks for sharing im so glad. actually i found this poem thru some member here at this site.. i read from the discussion.

god bless 5/5

Wow. And that word can't simply sum up what this poem is worth. This is an amazing piece right here Darling. I really enjoyed reading this, it was very inspirational..you have talent.

"And were fighting for peace,
Aging for youth,
Were dying for life,
And lying for truth."

^^ Those lines were just amazing, I adored them. Keep up the great work. ^_^

5.5

Thanks for the comment. I am glad to see other people write their deep feelings and love for God and Jesus. :) I read this poem and I have to say that it did move me. Another thing to be thankful for. 5/5

Wow, this is trully amazing thank you so much for the comment on mine sorry it took so long to get back...this is really good work, hope to read more soon! always keep your faith strong in him even when it really hurts and knowing that doing the right thing can be the hardest, keep your hope in him and you always have a place to run.
again this was absolutely amazing
your sister in Christ,
erica

Well i admire this poem so much for the style it was written but more so the topic. I have tried time and time again but i can never describe the Grace of God But u did it very well her I am amazed at your tallent. God bless and keep on writing. =)

Not a relilgious person myself, but you have a true talent. If there is a God he has given you a gift please use it often. This is a beautiful poem, even to an Athiest like myself.

Wow..
amazing wirte
i love how u picturedChrist in thisway,amazing truly
u got real talent,
keep it up
and when u can pls look at my work,and tell me what u think.
thankyou,God bless you and
takecare:)
-Lisa

Again another lovely write darlin. I love this one as well....the more i read of yours the more favorites i have. This one really shows the despair of a lost soul longing to be found. i love it. very inspiring. waiting for more lovely poems.....
always,
~*~Amber~*~