It's good

t.

Hey,
Again the title of your poem caught my attention and got me wanting to read this poem. I have to say your poems are quite unique... i can honestly say i have never read a poem like this! But this is really good as there oppisite of cliche. Anyways i like how youve compared life with a computer.. i loved your vocabulary usage, "Mung" is an.. intresting... word lol. Butr yeah im glad you used it in a poem. Very enjoyable reads! Keep them up! xx

Great concept, and i call this a new idea of poetry........ you are truly an artist that s why you came up with this beautiful poem, yet i dont know why ppl dont judge this poem fairly, cause this is a 5/5 poem......
keep it up

I've never seen a poem done like this. a good read, keep up the excellent work i've never read any poems on these topics. a good sense of individuality

your servant:
david

Tom
Your like an abstract artist of poetry

The flow is off. Maybe try shortening the lines some. Make them about the same length.

I've read alot of your work. And I have to say that it is different, but not in a bad way. You're ways of using words is really amazing. Unique is what everyone else is using, but I have to agree, it is a good word. lol Your poems are very unique, and just beautiful. Keep writing. I enjoyed this poem thoroughly. =) Thanks for posting, and thanks for the comments.
-Ally

Haha! I like this one. The definition of mung made me laugh...I don't really know why. The poem itself has a nice flow, and as I've said before...your word choice is epic. Wonderful job,
Kelsea

So accidental destruction of your brain and thoughts? Is that right? Maybe?....I love it anyway. You are awesome. 5/5 and you (as an author) added to my faves! great work as usual....

Lol you must be bored at class too? =P

Anyway it was a good poem, I'm really curious why the title has '2:21 am' in it.
The flow was okay you have some minor errors though.. well if you don't want to chance it.. it's okay :) just don't do it in the future *hihi*

1st.. capitalize the I's :)
2nd.. Ive = I've :)

Nonetheless it was a good poem.