As Time Passes By

by Dreaming Of Hope   Apr 10, 2007


Time Passes by and
Our love is stronger than ever
Our love is more tender than before
Our love is more honest than it was
Our love is more overwhelming than I had thought
Our love is wilder than it could have been
Our love is more exciting than it started out to be
Our love has more confidence than the beginning
Our love is more playful than before we knew it
Our love is more meaningful than anyone else's
Time passes by and our love is more
lasting than than time itself
Baby you mean the world to me

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  • 18 years ago

    by judith redmount

    I enjoyed reading the poems, but I shouldnot repeat so much at the beginning of each sentence. I would have left it away. but that is your poet's way of expressing your thoughts.

    Judith

  • 18 years ago

    by Amnah

    YOur poem's good, and meaningful. so tha's it. write, you'll improve definitely. Best of luck.

  • 18 years ago

    by silence

    I like this one. It expresses alot of feeling and a unique writing style. Just one suggestion on line

    'lasting than than time itself'

    might want to fix that :) otherwise I like it

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