Dying Promises

by Broken   Apr 11, 2007


I promised you my love,
I promised you my heart.
Then what did I do?
To make it all fall appart?
You promised me your care,
That you'd always hold me tight.
Atleast for a moment,
Everything felt right.
I promised you my loyalty,
That I'd love you through, and through.
What did that skank do?
To deserve a guy like you?
She promised you nothing. In fact,
She was cheating the whole time.
She could have had any guy...
Why did she pick mine?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marina

    I'm here,
    i knoe exactly how this is.. exactly, it mayjust eem that i am saying it but i promis.. yes promis i am not 5/5 very very good really short, but i llike the flow and it doenst need a lot more to describe the way you did.. excellently written
    -Marina

  • 16 years ago

    by SHaTeReD My HaRt

    Love it 6/5
    loved it awsome from the depth of
    heart

  • 16 years ago

    by glenn

    I love it i totally love it its sooo true only my skank was a guy :( he stole my boyfriend then my best friend and SKANKS NEED TO GO TO H***

    definatly love it 5/5:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Marina

    Extremely well written.. 5/5 excellent... i love it... true.. very good, my favorite paort is " why did she pick mine"... a very sensative sentance... very honest though.. and i'm sure you sitll want to know why... i do to... honestly... similar situation... what the F**k did the B**ch do to deserve "our" men... pisses me off... skank-tacular got what she had comeing to her though... atleast on my side...
    -Marina.

  • 17 years ago

    by ariel

    I like this poem alot
    its really good

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