by Hey Brittknee Apr 11, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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You don't know me on the inside. |
by i love you
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Wow that was an amazing poem. i have felt this way so many times in my life. its very good. |
by Mr O
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I like your work. Use of words and rhyme are very good. I think if you work on your cadence it could be outstanding. I gave you a 5 because I think this poem speaks very well emotionally. |
by AlaSkA
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Good flow, once again. this poem is very vivid when i see it in my head. good work. |
by icarus
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I liked the how in each stanza you used 'inside' as the last word of the first line. |
by Megann Lee
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Loved the flow and word choices very nicely done and written. |